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Torn world part 1

Altogether, it took no more than sixty minutes. No one knows how it happened. Was it a computer virus? A terrorist hacker? A human error? Or something even more sinister. No one knows. All they know is the facts. At exactly 12:00am on the 15th of June in the year 2011, all the worlds remaining nuclear missiles launched and every nuclear power station exploded. The missiles struck the worlds largest cities and the power stations destroyed everything nearby. The world was devastated and more then 60% was turned into a barren wasteland. From the resulting carnage, two opposing factions rose from the ashes.

Before the devastation, or the “hour of death” as it became known, Foreseer industries were the worlds leading biological and technological weapons development companies. Their leader, a ruthless warlord known only as the Overlord, somehow foresaw the coming destruction and fled underground, taking with him his most trusted friends and soldiers and the greatest minds in the company. In the aftermath of the hour of death, the Foreseers have only one objective, to rebuild the world under complete Foreseer control. And they will succeed, if they overcome the one obstacle, the Scavengers.

The Scavengers are the remaining free people of the world. The survivors of the hour of death who came together. They formed towns, cities, and communities using only their bare hands and the scrap and debris that remains of the ancient, shattered world. The Foreseers will take over everything unless the scavengers stop them.

Only one faction will survive the war of the torn world.
©2008 ~choas3633
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here is the first part of a story for which the idea had been in my head for ages. i may make it a sonic based story or i may not. i dont know yet
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*JadetheBat:iconJadetheBat: May 12, 2008, 2:06:57 PM
When'll you get Myth Wars chapter 3 done?

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Jaden Von Bat: One day, I will avenge my father's death!

Burn Bandicoot: Even if it takes me to the end of my days...I WILL destroy Nina Cortex!

Raphael Mario: My dream is to become a great superstar like my uncles, if not better!

(Our goals!)
~choas3633:iconchoas3633: May 13, 2008, 8:58:55 AM
soon

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~choas3633:iconchoas3633: May 13, 2008, 10:24:51 AM
actaully screw that. i've spent so much time today thinking up new weapons for this story that i've completely ran out of idea's for this story. if you've got any more idea's or want to try a chapter for your self then go ahead

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*JadetheBat:iconJadetheBat: May 13, 2008, 5:51:07 PM
Huh...Well if you decide to make this one a Sonic-related story, you could probably use Jade as a combat specialist for the Scavengers who "Hasn't been exactly right in the head since the Hour of Death" as described by one of the members of the team. Or if it's a NON-Sonic story, I have another non-video game character you can use. (Reply if you want to know who she is) Tell me which one it is and we'll talk.

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Jaden Von Bat: One day, I will avenge my father's death!

Burn Bandicoot: Even if it takes me to the end of my days...I WILL destroy Nina Cortex!

Raphael Mario: My dream is to become a great superstar like my uncles, if not better!

(Our goals!)
~choas3633:iconchoas3633: May 14, 2008, 7:55:45 AM
it probably will be not sonic, i've already got ideas for the main charcters there's

Axl: my normal character but based more around how i actaully act (e.g extremely volatile and slightly hyper)

Chris: Axl's girlfriend. a real tomboy who hates lokking or doing anything girly, so she used the aftermath of the hour of death to change her name from Christeena to just Chris

Abby: an 8 year old girl who ran away from her family on a holiday because her family hated her just before the hour of death. her parents were always arguing and then turning on her. and her sister was even more mean to her. she once locked Abby in her closet, even though she knew that Abby is extremely claustrophobic (she can only barely stand being in a car if all the windows are fully open) without her inhaler and without it she could more then likely die from it

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*JadetheBat:iconJadetheBat: May 14, 2008, 1:41:41 PM
I see...Well if you DO decide to add another character, Here's the one I mentioned yesterday-> [link] and here's her bio (the offical one going beond my original Idea)-> [link] and how she can fit into the storyline is thus, she's a bio weapon that two Scavengers salvaged from one of the Forseer labs who joins in their fight in taking down her own creators.

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Jaden Von Bat: One day, I will avenge my father's death!

Burn Bandicoot: Even if it takes me to the end of my days...I WILL destroy Nina Cortex!

Raphael Mario: My dream is to become a great superstar like my uncles, if not better!

(Our goals!)